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Lie to me:

the truth kills
#SixWordStories' Word Prompt: Lie to
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Less2TheTruth Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Artist
The truth is a two edged sword.
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FlickeringCandle Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Yes it is. It's much to easy to cut yourself. Thank you for the fave, by the way. :)
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Less2TheTruth Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Student Artist
Not a problem :)
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Celvas Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
Begging the question who is going to be killed: the one speaking truth, or the one receiving it. Probably both, the one receiving it mentally, the one speaking it physically. There are a lot of things I don't want to hear right now, some of them never - ever - in life - which is probably why these few words of yours have such a strong effect on me. But anyway, a felicitous piece telling each reader their own story.
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FlickeringCandle Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. :hug: I'm glad this affected you. :heart:
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Medoriko Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student Writer
I really enjoyed this. I like the parallels between the two statements. Almost as if it's two people having a conversation with one another. Or, even better, a person being conflicted between two inner thoughts. I like that you use the colon to separate the two "thoughts", i think that was well placed. I honestly CAN'T find anything to suggestion for this because it is perfect as it is. Very good interpretation of the prompt, as well.
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FlickeringCandle Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :blush: I think you may have found all the things I wanted to show. :D
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Medoriko Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Student Writer
:giggle: another great job ;)
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FlickeringCandle Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :heart:
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UndeadMiRaClEs Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The truth that they lie to you kills you. I understand paradoxes.
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